Quote Originally Posted by Andy View Post
Hi there, I think your ad could benefit from some refinement for a start. The wording is very cluttered. Change the layout to bullet points listing the features and recent work/pros of the car. The exterior shots are very good but you need interior pictures. Loose some of the paperwork pictures. And I think your price is a tad high so have a think about that too. It is a lovely car in fairness. Hope this is of help.
Thanks a lot, I see what you mean I copied the add straight from the for sale add I have on the forum and see now that it is not really appropriate for carzone/donedeal. I will amend the add and get some interior shots up. I will also review the price.